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Title: Burns So Good
Author: Surevesta
Fandom: Supernatural
Rating: PG-15
Word count: 240
Characters: Ruby
Summary: Ruby and her one true love.
A.Note: I can't believe I wrote this.
Beta: None




A low moan filled the air, mumbled and low. She dropped her head back against the leather seat. It was chilly from the cold like the rest of the car. Pink lips hmmed in ecstasy pursing sharply as she enjoyed the prickling twist of pleasure that flowed throw her body.

A burning sensation filled her body spiraling out from her gut twisting into every hidden crevice of her very being. Sliding her fingers over her lips she let them dip into her mouth. Her pink saliva wet tongue twisted around them lips pursed and suckling as another wave of burning tingles spiraled through her.

Her free hand fumbled on the passenger seat, searching, wanting. Pale deft fingers prodded and glid over the leather as her eyes shot open. Her moan turned needy and flowed into a groan.

"Dammit," She cursed sliding her fingers from her mouth. A sigh escaped her lips and was replaced by a glowering pout.

She turned the key in the ignition and started the car, pulling out of the parking place and into drive thru she stopped her car at a flickering display.

"Welcome to McDonalds-"

"French Fries. Five of the largest sizes," She glanced sideways at the passenger seat and the large pile of empty containers and wrappers that was spilling over onto the floor. French Fries- who knew something so innocent could be so addicting?

"Anything else?"

"Extra salt and ketchup. Lots of ketchup."

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Burns So Good by Surevesta


A.Note: First of my Ramble fic prompts, this one I gave myself: Ruby and French Fries with salt. After that question arose at a con... I came to this conclusion of why she eats it. Plus, she said it was deep fried crack.

Date: 2009-04-18 11:21 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] shea-fleur.livejournal.com
LOL! You had me going there for a minute. I thought I was reading a vastly different fic.

Food porn! FTW!

Date: 2009-04-18 11:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] surevesta.livejournal.com
*giggle* Glad you enjoyed it! I had this idea since I first heard that someone asked how she could eat French Fries at the LA Con.

Glad you liked it!

This is probably the closest thing I have come to writing porn too! Lol.

Date: 2009-04-23 04:31 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] xxringvirusxx.livejournal.com
Heya! I am the someone who asked the question that inspired you to write this short fic! LMAO when a friend of mine told me that someone wrote a fic about it i nearly died! Good story glad my question gave you this idea and LOVE the banner!

Date: 2009-04-23 05:50 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] surevesta.livejournal.com
I'm very glad you liked it! Thank you very much for asking that question in the first place!

Thank you so much for reading (thanks ^.^ I love making banners!)! <3

Suri

Date: 2009-05-20 11:08 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] labseraph.livejournal.com
Whoa! You got me to like Ruby for just a little while here. Hee!

Date: 2009-05-20 11:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] surevesta.livejournal.com
I made me like her here too XD Then I went back to loving the last couple mins of the season finale sooo much ^.^

Thanks for reading! I'm really glad you liked it! ^.^

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