I have read all of this in one stretch now..... and I think you posted this chapter while I was reading it... :-) Nice! A little bit more for me to read today!
I really like it! It's very well written and an interresting story. Can't wait for the rest of it to be posted.

(I hate reading WIPs because I like to read the entire thing in one go, but I have been so curious on this whenever you post, so I had to go back on my flist until I found one of your updates and start reading now.... Now I just have to learn how to wait for next update)