surevesta: A picture of Alec, from Dark Angel, smiling (Default)
Title: Dissonance - Part 10/10
Author: [personal profile] surevesta
Rating: PG-16
Fandom: CW RPS
Word Count: 10,145 (this part)
Pairing: J2
Main Characters: Jensen, Jared, full cast list here may contain spoilers.
Betas: [personal profile] anyothergirl415
Disclaimer: The story and plot is mine, the characters are based off of real people and belong to themselves. The places are also based off of real places. I know almost nothing of the foster care system.
Summary: The world of High School through the eyes of violist Jensen Ackles. Life is just notes on a page, waiting to be read and interpreted.



Dissonance by Surevesta
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surevesta: A picture of Alec, from Dark Angel, smiling (Default)
The final part of Dissonance is to the beta, finally! I'm just so exhilarated right now... it's over 9,800 words unbetaed and the longest part yet. That means Dissonance went over 70k words in total. To think I totally and utterly thought it would at most be 30k when I started... This is why it didn't end up making it for the big bang... my Jensen ate my mind and kept expanding it.

I really hope everyone enjoys the fic in its entirety and the story I created with it. My goal was to make a semi-realistic J2 HS AU story that didn't involve a ton of drama and was based in a high school setting that, for me at least, was pretty damn realistic. I also wanted to avoid using the 'popular' instruments (violin, cello) as what the main character played because that's what I see most often. Instead I used the viola, the instrument that I played during my elementary to HS years.

I didn't entirely avoid the cliche... I did write Jared as the 'star quarterback' because I wanted him to be in an entirely different social group then Jensen (who really didn't have much of a social group and was more of a loner). Yes, Chad was a Douche, but I tried to be pretty realistic considering I actually rewrote the original thing I had him do. He was always a jealous friend but my original draft had it be a lot worse... but it all seemed cliche- having a bunch of students make fun of Jensen for being gay? I've seen that written dozens of times before. I love college and HS au's but I always see them where tragedy after tragedy after tragedy occur... and that wasn't something I wanted to write.

In the end I did my best, wove a tail that I love and really has no ending. There are planned time stamps and, maybe, in the future I might write Jared's POV. The latter isn't set in stone, however.

My Jensen basically wrote the story himself. It wasn't originally planned to be entirely from his POV, his observations and opinions about what is going on around him, but that's how it ended up.

One thing to remember when reading this is that every scene is filled with Jensen's thoughts and observations. While there are peeks into the other characters lives, there are only a few characters that Jensen, and thus the reader, really gets to know. He knows a lot of interesting facts about the various people he sees but that doesn't mean he knows them or who they really are. Just like I didn't really know more then a handful of my HS friends well.

Anyway, Dissonance part 10 will be posted this weekend at some point. I hope you all enjoy it and thank you so much for reading!

88's Suri
surevesta: A picture of Alec, from Dark Angel, smiling (Default)
Title: Dissonance - Part 9
Author: [livejournal.com profile] surevesta
Rating: PG-16
Fandom: CW RPS
Word Count: 7,214 (this part)
Pairing: J2
Main Characters: Jensen, Jared, full cast list here may contain spoilers.
Betas: [livejournal.com profile] anyothergirl415
Disclaimer: The story and plot is mine, the characters are based off of real people and belong to themselves. The places are also based off of real places. I know almost nothing of the foster care system.
Summary: The world of High School through the eyes of violist Jensen Ackles. Life is just notes on a page, waiting to be read and interpreted.
Note: There will probably end up being ten parts.


Dissonance by Surevesta
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Update

Jun. 7th, 2009 08:24 am
surevesta: A picture of Alec, from Dark Angel, smiling (girl sad)
1. Dissonance Part 9: Sorry that his part is taking longer than expected. I had planned to have it out days ago but I decided to change one aspect of the last two parts, which means rewriting a portion of the last half of part 9. I sent the first portion to the beta and was hoping to get the rest finished last night/today... but things happen.

2. I'm going to WW, an utterly unplanned detour seeing as I was just there. Unfortunately, the letter I mailed to my Dad came back *here* for some reason. He's pissed off saying I didn't send it right in the first place... when really I'm not sure why. I put two stamps on it and all it's just a cd and a check. Maybe it needed another stamp... but I didn't even put a cover on the cd.

3. Taking Pala again ONLY because last night she decided to be a monkey. I have a bunk bed, full size on the bottom and twin bed on the top. My aunt was moving at the same time I was going to move into this apartment and my nine year old cousin wanted a different bed. He's almost 13 now. So, I use the top for storage- boxes and such. Pala got up there last night and made a racket- then got into my closet because the door was left open 1/4 of an inch. Now I'm tired and need to drive 2 1/2 hours.

4. I have another interview Tuesday at 10:30 here.

5. This post is temp public so readers know whats up... it's been a week and I said three days.

6. I accidentally added 'rewritting' to my 'dictionary' in regards to spell check for my internet browser... anyone know how I can remove it?
surevesta: A picture of Alec, from Dark Angel, smiling (Default)
(Up to Part 10)

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surevesta: A picture of Alec, from Dark Angel, smiling (Default)
Title: Dissonance - Part 8
Author: [livejournal.com profile] surevesta
Rating: PG-16
Fandom: CW RPS
Word Count: 6,536 (this part)
Pairing: J2
Main Characters: Jensen, Jared, Danneel, Sandy, Kripke, Chad, Mike, Chris, Sophia, Hayden, Adair, Rainbow, Allie
Other Characters: Samantha Ferris, Samantha Smith, Tom and Jaime, Aaron, Shawn, Kristin K., Kristin B., Alexis, JDM, and an assortment of other RPS regulars and CW actors/actresses.
Betas: [livejournal.com profile] anyothergirl415
Disclaimer: The story and plot is mine, the characters are based off of real people and belong to themselves. The places are also based off of real places. I know almost nothing of the foster care system.
Summary: The world of High School through the eyes of violist Jensen Ackles. Life is just notes on a page, waiting to be read and interpreted.
Note: There will probably end up being ten parts.


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surevesta: A picture of Alec, from Dark Angel, smiling (Default)
Title: Dissonance - Part 7
Author: [livejournal.com profile] surevesta
Rating: PG-16
Fandom: CW RPS
Word Count: 6,120 (this part)
Pairing: J2
Main Characters: Jensen, Jared, Danneel, Sandy, Kripke, Chad, Mike, Chris, Sophia, Hayden, Adair, Rainbow, Allie
Other Characters: Samantha Ferris, Samantha Smith, Tom and Jaime, Aaron, Shawn, Kristin K., Kristin B., Alexis, JDM, and an assortment of other RPS regulars and CW actors/actresses.
Betas: [livejournal.com profile] anyothergirl415
Disclaimer: The story and plot is mine, the characters are based off of real people and belong to themselves. The places are also based off of real places. I know almost nothing of the foster care system.
Summary: The world of High School through the eyes of violist Jensen Ackles. Life is just notes on a page, waiting to be read and interpreted.



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surevesta: A picture of Alec, from Dark Angel, smiling (alec laying on pillow)
Would I be murdered if I separated these last two parts into four? They'll be over 6k words each... but muse wants more details than I initially expected and I don't want to separate a part into an a/b post. >.<

If I do this the posting time will probably decrease to max of three days between posts, though, once I get this all betaed. No five day waits. There is just a bit more story than I anticipated in my outline and initial rough draft of these sections. By that I mean half way through part seven is only 1/4 to 1/3 of the outline I had for that part. Jensen just wants Jared time... I swear.

PS. I got a cat and she's cute and cuddly and her name is Pala and she is such an imp. She's black and adorable.
surevesta: A picture of Alec, from Dark Angel, smiling (Default)
Title: Dissonance - 6
Author: [livejournal.com profile] surevesta
Rating: PG-16
Fandom: CW RPS
Word Count: 6,241 (this part)
Pairing: J2
Main Characters: Jensen, Jared, Danneel, Sandy, Kripke, Chad, Mike, Chris, Sophia, Hayden, Adair, Rainbow, Allie
Other Characters: Samantha Ferris, Samantha Smith, Tom and Jaime, Aaron, Shawn, Kristin K., Kristin B., Alexis, JDM, and an assortment of other RPS regulars and CW actors/actresses.
Betas: [livejournal.com profile] anyothergirl415
Disclaimer: The story and plot is mine, the characters are based off of real people and belong to themselves. The places are also based off of real places. I know almost nothing of the foster care system.
Summary: The world of High School through the eyes of violist Jensen Ackles. Life is just notes on a page, waiting to be read and interpreted.



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surevesta: A picture of Alec, from Dark Angel, smiling (alec laying on pillow)
Photographer: Surevesta
Date: May 2009
Location: Walla Walla HS, the HS I based the one in Dissonance off of.

A kind of tour of the campus. I left what I needed to have to work more on the new parts at my apartment- so I borrowed my Mom's camera and my Dad's loveable yellow lab Belle and drove over to the HS campus to take these photos. There are quite a few of them- and there were more that didn't turn out (first time using that camera and it was confusing). I hope you all enjoy. The next part of Dissonance should be up Sunday evening- even if I don't have the next part to the beta. I only have a few more scenes to work on for part seven anyway.

Till then, I hope you enjoy this!

I wrote based off my memory so there will be some discrepancies between these pictures and the story. Just call it creative licensing or whatever.

High School Photos )
surevesta: A picture of Alec, from Dark Angel, smiling (Default)
Title: Dissonance - 5
Author: [livejournal.com profile] surevesta
Rating: PG-16
Fandom: CW RPS
Word Count: 6,318 (this part)
Pairing: J2
Main Characters: Jensen, Jared, Danneel, Sandy, Kripke, Chad, Mike, Chris, Sophia, Hayden, Adair, Rainbow, Allie
Other Characters: Samantha Ferris, Samantha Smith, Tom and Jaime, Aaron, Shawn, Kristin K., Kristin B., Alexis, JDM, and an assortment of other RPS regulars and CW actors/actresses.
Betas: [livejournal.com profile] anyothergirl415
Disclaimer: The story and plot is mine, the characters are based off of real people and belong to themselves. The places are also based off of real places. I know almost nothing of the foster care system.
Summary: The world of High School through the eyes of violist Jensen Ackles. Life is just notes on a page, waiting to be read and interpreted.
A.Note: Yes you read correctly- that is not a typo. I expanded a section due to the instance of my muse and my Jensen. So a 500-1k word portion of Part 6 ended up being 6.1k or so... thus adding a whole new part to this fic.



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Title: Dissonance - 4
Author: [livejournal.com profile] surevesta
Rating: PG-16
Fandom: CW RPS
Word Count: 6,767 (this part)
Pairing: J2
Main Characters: Jensen, Jared, Danneel, Sandy, Kripke, Chad, Mike, Chris, Sophia, Hayden, Adair, Rainbow, Allie
Other Characters: Samantha Ferris, Samantha Smith, Tom and Jaime, Aaron, Shawn, Kristin K., Kristin B., Alexis, JDM, and an assortment of other RPS regulars and CW actors/actresses.
Betas: [livejournal.com profile] anyothergirl415
Disclaimer: The story and plot is mine, the characters are based off of real people and belong to themselves. The places are also based off of real places. I know almost nothing of the foster care system.
Summary: The world of High School through the eyes of violist Jensen Ackles. Life is just notes on a page, waiting to be read and interpreted.



Dissonance by Surevesta
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Title: Dissonance - 3
Author: [livejournal.com profile] surevesta
Rating: PG-16
Fandom: CW RPS
Word Count: 8364 (this part)
Pairing: J2
Main Characters: Jensen, Jared, Danneel, Sandy, Kripke, Chad, Mike, Chris, Sophia, Hayden, Adair, Rainbow, Allie
Other Characters: Samantha Ferris, Samantha Smith, Tom and Jaime, Aaron, Shawn, Kristin K., Kristin B., Alexis, JDM, and an assortment of other RPS regulars and CW actors/actresses.
Betas: [livejournal.com profile] anyothergirl415
Disclaimer: The story and plot is mine, the characters are based off of real people and belong to themselves. The places are also based off of real places. I know almost nothing of the foster care system.
Summary: The world of High School through the eyes of violist Jensen Ackles. Life is just notes on a page, waiting to be read and interpreted.



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Title: Dissonance - 2
Author: [livejournal.com profile] surevesta
Rating: PG-16
Fandom: CW RPS
Word Count: 6415 (this part)
Pairing: J2
Main Characters: Jensen, Jared, Danneel, Sandy, Kripke, Chad, Mike, Chris, Sophia, Hayden, Adair, Rainbow, Allie
Other Characters: Samantha Ferris, Samantha Smith, Tom and Jaime, Aaron, Shawn, Kristin K., Kristin B., Alexis, JDM, and an assortment of other RPS regulars and CW actors/actresses.
Betas: [livejournal.com profile] anyothergirl415
Disclaimer: The story and plot is mine, the characters are based off of real people and belong to themselves. The places are also based off of real places. I know almost nothing of the foster care system.
Summary: The world of High School through the eyes of violist Jensen Ackles. Life is just notes on a page, waiting to be read and interpreted.



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surevesta: A picture of Alec, from Dark Angel, smiling (Default)
My fingers needed a break... so... I made this for my fic. Image sources can be found at the fic Master Post.



Dissonance by Surevesta
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surevesta: A picture of Alec, from Dark Angel, smiling (Default)
Title: Dissonance - 1
Author: [livejournal.com profile] surevesta
Rating: PG-16
Fandom: CW RPS
Word Count: 7,749 (this part)
Pairing: J2
Main Characters: Jensen, Jared, Danneel, Sandy, Kripke, Chad, Mike, Chris, Sophia, Hayden, Adair, Rainbow, Allie
Other Characters: Samantha Ferris, Samantha Smith, Tom and Jaime, Aaron, Shawn, Kristin K., Kristin B., Alexis, JDM, and an assortment of other RPS regulars and CW actors/actresses.
Betas: [livejournal.com profile] anyothergirl415 and [livejournal.com profile] darkmerrick
Disclaimer: The story and plot is mine, the characters are based off of real people and belong to themselves. The places are also based off of real places. I know almost nothing of the foster care system.
Summary: The world of High School through the eyes of violist Jensen Ackles. Life is just notes on a page, waiting to be read and interpreted.


Dissonance by Surevesta
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Part One: Particles of sticky dust meshed into the cotton fabric of Jensen's over shirt... )
surevesta: A picture of Alec, from Dark Angel, smiling (Default)
Title: Dissonance - Master Post
Author: [personal profile] surevesta
Rating: PG-16
Fandom: CW RPS
Word Count: 71,869
Pairing: J2
Main Characters: Jensen, Jared, plus others. Full cast list here (contains spoilers)
Betas: [personal profile] anyothergirl415 and [personal profile] darkmerrick
Disclaimer: The story and plot is mine, the characters are based off of real people and belong to themselves. The places are also based off of real places. I know almost nothing of the foster care system.
Summary: The world of High School through the eyes of violist Jensen Ackles. Life is just notes on a page, waiting to be read and interpreted.



Dissonance by Surevesta
Part One - Part Two - Part Three - Part Four - Part Five - Part Six - Part Seven - Part Eight - Part Nine - Part Ten

Photo Tour of the High School

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